As discussed in class, your front cover is good; it clearly has a target audience of young females and you've used conventions suited to this audience. Good use of colour throughout. However, your internal pages (the articles) make up a considerable amount of the grade and all pieces must be of the same quality. Your brief also stated that ALL pieces needed to be posted to the blog.
There is some evidence of ideas and product being well imagined. Well conceived layout. You have fulfilled the brief in a very imaginative manner with strong sense of style and purpose. EBI: Ensure that you keep sense of audience to the forefront. Be aware of form and function of products - their look and their purpose.
As discussed in class, your front cover is good; it clearly has a target audience of young females and you've used conventions suited to this audience. Good use of colour throughout. However, your internal pages (the articles) make up a considerable amount of the grade and all pieces must be of the same quality. Your brief also stated that ALL pieces needed to be posted to the blog.
ReplyDeleteGRADE: C/D (the front cover is worthy of a C)
There is some evidence of ideas and product being well imagined. Well conceived layout. You have fulfilled the brief in a very imaginative manner with strong sense of style and purpose.
ReplyDeleteEBI: Ensure that you keep sense of audience to the forefront. Be aware of form and function of products - their look and their purpose.